Notebook reflection

That was interesting, critiquing my own work, taking the raw expression of pen to paper and making it cold and formal in a blog post. Yes it still has expression and images, but now they're for the audience and not just for myself. I found myself cutting out things that only made sense to me like clever inside jokes, lyrics, quotes, and odd feelings. Overall it wasn't too bad, but I don't like being overly critical of my own work.